1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-10-21 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Surviv.io 내 용 Surviv.io is back to the desert event. It has a great amount of air drops. That means it has a great amount of flare gun. There are flare guns in the container, There are flare guns on the floor, there are so many airdrops.!!!@!!!!!1 Even , there were 14 airdrops at once and I was rich. And on the center of the map, there are big tree and under tree, there is a box and when you open the box, you will get a strobe. And with that strobe, you can call an airstrike. And with that air strike you break a statue. And under the statue, you get a captain hat and an AN-94 or SUPER90 both is a great weapon. image view 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-10-21 답변내용 It has a great amount of air drops. That means it has a great amount of flare gun. - It has a great amount of air drops that means it has a great amount of flare guns. - You shouldn't forget the plurality itself and you should connect the sentence instead of ending it the adding another without a complete thought. There are flare guns in the container, There are flare guns on the floor, there are so many airdrops.!!!@!!!!!1 -There are flare guns in the container and there are flare guns on the floor. There are so many airdrops!!! - You should connect the sentence instead of putting a comma and also avoid using excessive commas. And on the center of the map, there are big tree and under tree, there is a box and when you open the box, you will get a strobe. - And on the center of the map, there are big trees and under the trees, there is a box and when you open the box, you will get a strobe. - A little careful when it comes to the plurality of the subjects. And with that strobe, you can call an airstrike. And with that air strike you break a statue. And under the statue, you get a captain hat and an AN-94 or SUPER90 both is a great weapon. -With that strobe, you can call an airstrike and with that air strike you'll break a statue. Under the statue, you get a captain hat and an AN-94 or SUPER90 both are great weapons. - You should avoid using excessive "and" then you should agree the subjects themselves with their corresponding verbs. Surviv.io Surviv.io is back to the desert event. It has a great amount of air drops that means it has a great amount of flare guns. There are flare guns in the container and there are flare guns on the floor. There are so many airdrops!!! And on the center of the map, there are big trees and under the trees, there is a box and when you open the box, you will get a strobe. With that strobe, you can call an airstrike and with that air strike you'll break a statue. Under the statue, you get a captain hat and an AN-94 or SUPER90 both are great weapons.