1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-10-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Surviv.io(Which has a lot of updates) 내 용 Surviv.io is back to the potato. And in the club, there is a bucker. And when you get in side, and smash red box, you get a potato cannon. Its damage is wow.... nice And its bullet? Infinity. (NICE) And when you smash a potato with a weapon, you get a gun. And when you smash it with a sword, you get a other sword. You can get a really long sword that I can not think of. The good gun: M249, PKP, USAS-12, SV-98, AWM-S, QBB-98 The bad gun: M9, OT-38, OTS-38, MP5, MAC-10 That is a few of the Bad gun, Good gun. And when you smash a potato with a potato cannnon, you don't get anything. image view 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-10-18 답변내용 Surviv.io(Which has a lot of updates) -Surviv.io which has a lot of updates - You need to connect them instead putting open parenthesis. Surviv.io is back to the potato. And in the club, there is a bucker. - Surviv.io is back to the potato and there is a bucker in the club. - Don't interchange the words in a sentence and also you need to connect since you've used "and". And when you get in side, and smash red box, you get a potato cannon. Its damage is wow.... nice And its bullet? Infinity. - When you get inside and smash red box, you'll get a potato cannon. It's damage is nice and it's bullet is infinity. - You need to avoid excessive "and" then you need to connect them since you've used "and". (NICE) And when you smash a potato with a weapon, you get a gun. And when you smash it with a sword, you get a other sword. You can get a really long sword that I can not think of. - When you smash a potato with a weapon, you'll get a gun and when you smash it with a sword, you'll get another sword. You can get a really long sword that I cannot think of. - You need to use the future tense of "will" since you're about to get it and also use proper spacing and avoid using excessive "and". The good gun: M249, PKP, USAS-12, SV-98, AWM-S, QBB-98 - The good guns: M249, PKP, USAS-12, SV-98, AWM-S, QBB-98 - You need to use the plural form of "gun" because you put the variations of guns here. The bad gun: M9, OT-38, OTS-38, MP5, MAC-10 - The bad guns: M9, OT-38, OTS-38, MP5, MAC-10 - You should use the plural form of "gun" because you put variations of guns here. That is a few of the Bad gun, Good gun. And when you smash a potato with a potato cannnon, you don't get anything. - Those are some of the bad guns and good guns and when you smash a potato with a potato cannon, you don't get anything. - You should use "those" and "some" because you've used of plural form of "guns". Most of all, you need to connect them because you used the conjunctions of "and". Surviv.io which has a lot of updates Surviv.io is back to the potato and there is a bucker in the club. When you get inside and smash red box, you'll get a potato cannon. It's damage is nice and it's bullet is infinity. When you smash a potato with a weapon, you'll get a gun and when you smash it with a sword, you'll get another sword. You can get a really long sword that I cannot think of. The good guns: M249, PKP, USAS-12, SV-98, AWM-S, QBB-98. The bad guns: M9, OT-38, OTS-38, MP5, MAC-10 Those are some of the bad guns and good guns and good guns and when you smash a potato with a potato cannon, you don't get anything.