1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-10-14 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Surviv.io 내 용 Surviv.io is back to normal. And is boring. So, I will tel you about the updates that surviv.io had few years ago. Potato update: it had no potato cannon or something like that. 50VS50:Its airdrop is huge. So, many people at the airdrop has a lot of gooooooood items. Fall update: Its bucker has a very good items. USAS-12, PKP, M249. Spring event: It had a woods king and a spear that I cannot think right now. And if your lucky, maybe a PKP. Hah, Hah yeah they had a goooood events My best is potato. The Fall and spring event has too many trees. And in 50VS50 it's hard to become a leader or Medic. image view 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-10-14 답변내용 Surviv.io is back to normal. And is boring. - Surviv.io is back to normal and it is boring. - You should connect the conjunction of "and" since its purpose is to connect words. So, I will tel you about the updates that surviv.io had few years ago. - So, I will tell you about the updates that surviv.io had few years ago. - You need to be careful in spelling. Potato update: it had no potato cannon or something like that. - The potato update had no potato cannon or something like that. - You should make it in a sentence because colon use to elaborate something. 50VS50:Its airdrop is huge. - The 50 vs. 50 is its airdrop and it is huge. - You shouldn't capitalize the "vs." and connect this sentence. So, many people at the airdrop has a lot of gooooooood items. - So, many people at the airdrops has a lot of good items. - You should be careful in spelling. Fall update: Its bucker has a very good items. - The fall update: Its bucker has very good items and they are USAS-12, PKP, M249. - You should use "the" because it is specific and also don't add the article of "a" if it is many. You also need to connect them. Spring event: It had a woods king and a spear that I cannot think right now. And if your lucky, maybe a PKP. - The spring event: It had a woods king and a spear that I cannot think right now and if you are lucky then maybe a PKP. - You should connect the sentences and avoid using excessive commas in each sentence that you construct. Hah, Hah yeah they had a goooood events My best is potato. - Hahaha... yeah they had good events but my bet is potato. - You need to make your sentence clear and in a complete thought. The Fall and spring event has too many trees. And in 50VS50 it's hard to become a leader or Medic. - The fall and spring events have too many trees and in 50 vs. 50 it's hard to become a leader or a medic. - You should make the noun "event" in plural form because your subject is in plural forms and also don't capitalize the "vs." . Most of all, use the article of "a" because it is singular. Surviv.io Surviv.io is back to normal and it is boring. So, I will tell you about the updates that surviv.io had few years ago. The potato update had no potato cannon or something like that. The 50 vs. 50 is its airdrop and it is huge. So, many people at the airdrops has a lot of good items. The fall update: Its bucker has very good items and they are USAS-12, PKP, M249. The spring event: It had a woods king and a spear that I cannot think right now and if you are lucky then maybe a PKP. Hahaha... Yeah, they had good events but my bet is potato. The fall and spring events have too many trees and in 50 vs. 50 it's hard to become a leader or a medic.