1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-10-08 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 I have done the most normal thing in my whole life( or maybe not) I bought the cristmas gun with black and yellow. Without the ribon, it will be perfact. And I have download spiner.io. Is the game that you knock the other spiners. But really, I have won 160 games, even I downloaded yesterday. I have 7000coins. And the most expensive style is 10000coins. And they even have a package it costs \1,390. First 3day is free and after that you have to pay. And how can I easily win 160 games? Next time man, next time. 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-10-08 답변내용 shell shockers - Shell Shockers - Proper nouns should be in capitalization. I have done the most normal thing in my whole life( or maybe not) - I have done the most normal thing in my whole life or maybe not. - Better to make this as a whole sentence instead of separating them with close and open parenthesis. I bought the cristmas gun with black and yellow. Without the ribon, it will be perfact. - I bought the Christmas gun with black and yellow colors without its ribbon it will be perfect. - You better don't separate them and also use possessive pronouns for this. Remember be careful in spelling. And I have download spiner.io. Is the game that you knock the other spiners. But really, I have won 160 games, even I downloaded yesterday. - I have downloaded spiner.io. and it is the game that you knock the other spinners. But I really have won the 160 games, even I downloaded it yesterday. - You should be careful in spelling and also you better to connect the sentences instead of separating them. Please, don't interchange the words in a sentence and use pronouns to avoid repetition. I have 7000coins. And the most expensive style is 10000coins. - I have 7000 coins and the most expensive style is 10000 coins. - You should connect them because you've used the conjunction of "and". Then, proper spacing. And they even have a package it costs \1,390. - They even have a package that it costs \1,390. - You should extract the word "and". Then, use determiner for this sentence. First 3day is free and after that you have to pay. And how can I easily win 160 games? Next time man, next time. -The first 3 days is free trial after that you have to pay and how I can easily win 160 games? - You should use indirect question because it accompanied by the other words and also use the article of "the". Most of all, proper spacing and connect the sentence. Shell Shockers I have done the most normal thing in my whole life or maybe not. I bought the Christmas gun with black and yellow colors without its ribbon it will be perfect. I have downloaded spiner.io. and it is the game that you knock the other spinners. But I really have won the 160 games, even I downloaded it yesterday. I have 7000 coins and the most expensive style is 10000 coins. They even have a package that it costs \1,390. The first 3 days is free trial after that you have to pay and how I can easily win 160 games? Next time man, next time.