1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-10-04 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but it's bad because i can't shoot because in the free ranger's case I have to aim and shoot. so, when someone is nare i can't shoot, or i'll be wasteing my shot. But when someone is far I can aim right I can shoot right then is done just like that. My most killing is 7kills. I chang my team a lot because i don't want to killed a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people is better than me so i'm going to play shell shockers a lot. so, I can be better than anyone in the world. THE END 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-10-04 답변내용 shell shockers - Shell Shockers - You should capitalize them. My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but it's bad because i can't shoot because in the free ranger's case I have to aim and shoot. so, when someone is nare i can't shoot, or i'll be wasteing my shot. - My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but I can't shoot because I have to aim and shoot in the free ranger's case. So, when someone is near I can't shoot well or I'll be wasting my bullets. - You shouldn't interchange your sentences because you need to have a concise sentence. Most of all, be careful in proper spacing and spelling of the words. Spelling plays a vital role in a sentence. But when someone is far I can aim right I can shoot right then is done just like that. - But when someone is far I can aim and shoot properly then it is done just like that. - You need to avoid using excessive "can" you better use the conjunction of "and" to connect them rather to repeat them. Use pronouns if it needed. My most killing is 7kills. - Most of my killings are 7 kills. - You need to make your subject and verbs agree to each other. Follow the subject verb-agreements. Please use proper spacing. I chang my team a lot because i don't want to killed a lot. - I change most of my team because I don't want to kill a lot. - You need to capitalize the "I" and it's part of the proper capitalization. Avoid using excessive "a lot" and use other terms for your sentence. I'm good at shell shockers but many people is better than me so i'm going to play shell shockers a lot. so, I can be better than anyone in the world. - I'm good at shell shockers but many people are better than me, so I'm going to play shell shockers a lot. So, I can be better than anyone in the world. - Once again you need to use the proper verb to make it agrees with your subject and also "I" is always in capitalization but remember every rule there's an exception. Use also comma so you don't need to read it continuously. THE END -The end. - You shouldn't capitalize them all. Shell Shockers My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but I can't shoot because I have to aim and shoot in the free ranger's case. So, when someone is near I can't shoot well or I'll be wasting my bullets. But when someone is far I can aim and shoot properly then it is done just like that. Most of my killings are 7 kills. I change most of my team because I don't want to kill a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people are better than me, so I'm going to play shell shockers a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people are better than me, so I'm going to play shell shockers a lot. So, I can be better than anyone in the world. The end.