1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-09-27 Weather    Feeling  Gloomy 제 목 Rolling sky 내 용 Rolling sky is you touch the screen and move it and if you crash to the obstruction you die I like rolling sky because the game music is so my style. Especially the 8bits. I tryed to finish 8bits but I die in 85%. I was so angry. But that is that, after all.And before there was city, and more. But it all disappeared because the new track appeared but 8bits,massif and sky survived. Yes, I mean only 3tracks survived.Before massif was 1level and sky was 2level and the tree was 3level.But now is changed. And they have a lot of levels. The hardest level is happy birthday. If you just look at the titles, you will think that it is easy. But no. It is the most hard 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-09-27 답변내용 Rolling sky -The Rolling Sky - You need to use the article of "the" to make it specific. Rolling sky is you touch the screen and move it and if you crash to the obstruction you die - Rolling sky is you touch the screen and move it. If you crash to the obstruction then you die. - You need to end the first sentence instead of using excessive of conjunction "but" and also you "then" for the results. Most of all, end the sentence with a period. I like rolling sky because the game music is so my style. Especially the 8bits. - I like rolling sky because its music is so my style especially the 8 bits. -You should use possessive pronouns to make it clearer and proper. Most of all connect the word "especially" to your first sentence instead of putting a period after that because it's not a complete thought. I tryed to finish 8bits but I die in 85%. - I tried to finish 8 bits but I died when it's in 85%. - You need to be careful in spelling of the word and also use past simple tense because it's in the past already. You better make your sentence concise with proper pronouns. I was so angry. But that is that, after all.And before there was city, and more. - I was so angry but that's it all and before there was a city and more. -You should connect them and make sure your sentence is in a complete thought then you should the article of "a" because it's a singular. But it all disappeared because the new track appeared but 8bits,massif and sky survived. - But it was all disappeared because the new track appeared but only in 8 bits massif and sky survived. - You should use the word "was" to make it agreed with the pronouns that you've used. once again, you need to connect your sentences well. Yes, I mean only 3tracks survived.Before massif was 1level and sky was 2level and the tree was 3level.But now is changed. And they have a lot of levels. - Yes, I mean it's only 3 tracks survived. Before the massif was in level 1, the sky was in level 2 and the tree was in level 3, but now it is changed and they have a lot of levels. - You shouldn't interchanged your sentences and also don't use excessive conjunction of "and". You should connect them properly instead of separating your sentences. If you just look at the titles, you will think that it is easy. But no. It is the most hard - If you just look at the title, you will think that it is easy but it is not. Actually, it is the most difficult one. - You shouldn't use construct a sentence without a complete thought. It is way better that you connect them all since you used the conjunction of "but" and choose the better words to make your sentences clear. The Rolling Sky Rolling sky is you touch the screen and move it. If you crash to the obstruction then you die. Rolling sky is you touch the screen and move it. If you crash to the obstruction then you die. I like rolling sky because its music is so my style especially the 8 bits. I tried to finish 8 bits but I died when it's in 85%. I was so angry but that's it all and before there was a city and more. But it was all disappeared because the new track appeared but only in 8 bits massif and sky survived. Yes, I mean it's only 3 tracks survived. Before the massif was in level 1, the sky was in level 2 and the tree was in level 3, but now it is changed and they have a lot of levels. The hardest level is the happy birthday. If you just look at the title, you will think that it is easy but it is not. Actually, it is the most difficult one.