1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-09-26 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 I have done the most normal thing in my whole life( or maybe not) I bought the cristmas gun with black and yellow. Without the ribon, it will be perfact. And I have download spiner.io. Is the game that you knock the other spiners. But really, I have won 160 games, even I downloaded yesterday. I have 7000coins. And the most expensive style is 10000coins. And they even have a package it costs \1,390. First 3day is free and after that you have to pay. And how can I easily win 160 games? Next time man, next time. image view 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-09-26 답변내용 shell shockers -Shell shockers - Use the capitalization in the first word. I bought the cristmas gun with black and yellow. -I bought a Christmas gun with black and yellow. - Use the article of "a' for singular and make the word "Christmas" in capital with its first letter. Without the ribon, it will be perfact. -Without the ribbon, it will be perfect. -You should use the proper spelling of these words. And I have download spiner.io. - And I have downloaded spiner.io. - You need to follow the word "have" with past participle. Is the game that you knock the other spiners. -it s the game that you knock the other spinners. - Use the proper spelling and proper pronouns. But really, I have won 160 games, even I downloaded yesterday. -But I really have won 160 games even I only downloaded it yesterday. - You shouldn't interchange the words in a sentence and also use "only" to make it clearly. I have 7000coins. And the most expensive style is 10000coins. - I have 7000 coins and the most expensive style is 10000 coins. - You need to be careful in spacing and also better to combine "and" rather than ending your first in complete sentence with dot. And they even have a package it costs \1,390. -And they even have a package that it costs \1,390. -Use the determiner in this sentence. First 3day is free and after that you have to pay. - The first 3 days is free and after that you have to pay. - Use the article of "the" to be make it specific. Shell shockers I have done the most normal thing in my whole life (or maybe not) I bought a Christmas gun with black and yellow. Without the ribbon, it will be perfect. And I have downloaded spiner.io. it is the game that you knock the other spinners. But I really have won 160 games even I only downloaded it yesterday. I have 7000 coins and the most expensive style is 10000 coins. And they even have a package that it costs 1,390. The first 3 days is free and after that you have to pay. And how can I easily win 160 games? Next time man, next time.