1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-09-24 Weather    Feeling  Pain 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 Shell shockers is very hard, but I think I got it master. It takes months to be master (Especially when you are playing computer at weekend. My mom makes me play computer at the weekend. I don't know why. Mom says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. I agree with that but ah, I want to do it everyday. And my dream is conneted with computer. But I think it's not a good idea. It's bad for my health. Heh Heh^^; And my mom is doing it for my own good.) Okay, how did I come this far from shell shockers? Even I didn't know.^^; sorry~ But when I get deep in one title, before I know it, I just get deeper. Okay I think it's enough for today. Bye~ ^^ image view 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-09-24 답변내용 but I think I got it master. -but I think I got it mastered. -Use past tense after the word "got" It takes months to be master (Especially when you are playing computer at weekend. My mom makes me play computer at the weekend. I don't know why. Mom says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. I agree with that but ah, I want to do it everyday. -It takes months to get mastered it (especially when you are playing computer at the weekends only. My mom let me play computer at the weekends. I don't know why but she says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. -You should be careful in past tense and also use appropriate words for your sentences to convey a clear message. And my dream is conneted with computer. But I think it's not a good idea. It's bad for my health. Heh Heh^^; -And my dream is connected with the computer. -Use the proper spelling And my mom is doing it for my own good.) -And my mom is doing it for my own good. - Remove open parenthesis if you're only going to put one of them. Even I didn't know - Even me, I didn't know. - You need to use "me" to emphasize it clearly. But when I get deep in one title, before I know it, I just get deeper. Okay I think it's enough for today. Bye~ ^^ - But when I find it very interesting before I know it, I just find myself getting drowned by this game. Okay I think that's enough for today. - Use appropriate words for a sentence. You need to be clear for your sentences. Shell Shockers Shell shockers is very hard, but I think I got it mastered. It takes months to get mastered it (especially when you are playing computer at the weekends only. My mom let me play computer at the weekends. I don't know why but she says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. And my dream is connected with the computer. But I think it's not a good idea. It's bad for my health. Heheheh^^; And my mom is doing it for my own good. Okay, how did I come this far from shell shockers? Even me, I didn't know.^^; sorry~ But when I find it very interesting before I know it, I just find myself getting drowned by this game. Okay I think that's enough for today. Bye~ ^^