1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-09-23 Weather    Feeling  Pain 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but it's bad because i can't shoot because in the free ranger's case I have to aim and shoot. so, when someone is nare i can't shoot, or i'll be wasteing my shot. But when someone is far I can aim right I can shoot right then is done just like that. My most killing is 7kills. I chang my team a lot because i don't want to killed a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people is better than me so i'm going to play shell shockers a lot. so, I can be better than anyone in the world. THE END 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-09-23 답변내용 My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but it's bad because i can't shoot because in the free ranger's case - My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but it's bad because I can't shoot. - Be careful in spacing and also make sure to make the word "I" in a capital letter always. because in the free ranger's case I have to aim and shoot. so, when someone is nare i can't shoot, or i'll be wasteing my shot. - and in the free ranger's case I have to aim and shoot. So, when someone is near to me I can't shoot him or I'll be wasting my bullet. - You need to use the proper capitalization after the dots and also be careful in spelling. You also need to use other term to make your sentence clearly. But when someone is far I can aim right I can shoot right then is done just like that. - But when someone is far I can aim and I can shoot right then it is done just like that. - You need to avoid redundancy and also use the third subject of pronoun which is "it". My most killing is 7kills. I chang my team a lot because i don't want to killed a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people is better than me so i'm going to play shell shockers a lot. - Most of my killing is 7 kills. I change most of my team because I don't want to kill a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people is better than me so I'm going to play shell shockers a lot. So, I can be better than anyone in the world. - You need to be careful in proper spacing and also the spelling then use other word to make it appropriate in your sentence. Importantly, don't interchange the sentence. THE END - The end. - Don't capitalize all of these letters. It's more proper to do this. Shell Shockers My main character of shell shockers is free ranger but it's bad because I can't shoot and in the free ranger's case I have to aim and shoot. So, when someone is near to me I can't shoot him or I'll be wasting my bullet. But when someone is far I can aim and I can shoot right then it is done just like that. Most of my killing is 7 kills. I change most of my team because I don't want to kill a lot. I'm good at shell shockers but many people is better than me so I'm going to play shell shockers a lot. The End.