1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-09-20 Weather    Feeling  Pain 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 Shell shockers is the best game I ever played. Is fun and it's my style.(But is very hard because the enemy can shot out from anywere or the enemy can hide anywere. And, as I said yesterday it's very hard to make you're own skills when tou can play the computer only at weekend and only 30 minutes? But still I got it master.............. But when i'm not good at games then I will ask my mom to raise up the time to 1hour but I still think 30minutes is not enough. Don't you think so? No? hmmmmmmmmmm....) Okay, how did I got this far from Shell Shockers?(Again) And I think is enough. Bye (Or whatever) 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-09-20 답변내용 shell shockers - Shell Shockers - Use the capitalization of these words because it is more proper. Shell shockers is the best game I ever played. -The shell shockers is the best game that I've ever played. - You should use the article of the to make it very specific and then use the present perfect tense since you didn't put the actual date that you played it. Is fun and it's my style..(But is very hard because the enemy can shot out from anywere or the enemy can hide anywere. - It is fun and it's my style but it is very hard because the enemy can shot me from anywhere or the enemy can hide anywhere. - You should use "it" to make it clear what you're pertaining a certain subject. Better to use the third subject/subjective pronouns to avoid repetition and to connect it with the word you are pertaining. Then, be careful in spelling because it modifies your sentences and also the proper usage of the word "shot". You shouldn't use shot out because it sounds like "shout out" which very far from what you're describing. And, as I said yesterday it's very hard to make you're own skills when tou can play the computer only at weekend and only 30 minutes? But still I got it master.............. - And as I said yesterday, it was very hard to make your own skills and you can only play the computer every weekends for only 30 minutes. -You better need to put comma after the word yesterday then use past simple tense instead of simple present tense it was in the past already and also make that the proper order your sentence is correct. Most of all, use the word "for" instead of "and". But still I got it master.............. But when i'm not good at games then I will ask my mom to raise up the time to 1hour but I still think 30minutes is not enough. Don't you think so? No? hmmmmmmmmmm....) - But still I mastered it but when I'm not good at games I will ask my mom to extend the time to 1 hour. hmm... - You should use the past simple tense instead of "got it" it makes your sentence unclear and in proper grammar you should use the capitalization of "I" in the word of "I'm". You should use "So" instead of using the word "then' that seem shows a come out/result. Most of all, be careful in spacing. Avoid excessive dots and "hmm". Okay, how did I got this far from Shell Shockers?(Again) And I think is enough. Bye (Or whatever) - Okay, how did I get this far from Shell Shockers again? And I think it is enough. Bye or whatever! - You should use the present tense of "got" because you're asking a past tense question in order to avoid repetitions and wrong grammar then you need to connect the word "again" instead of separating it with parenthesis. It makes the sentence unclear and disorganized. You should also use the subjective pronouns of "it" to make your sentence clear and pertains the subject that you are talking about. Most of all, to avoid repetitions. Finally, again better to use the conjunction word of "or" instead using parenthesis and exclamation point at the end of the word that shows extreme feelings. Shell Shockers The shell shockers is the best game that I've ever played. It is fun and it's my style but it is very hard because the enemy can shot me from anywhere or the enemy can hide anywhere. And as I said yesterday, it was very hard to make your own skills and you can only play the computer every weekends for only 30 minutes, but still I mastered it and when I'm not good at games I will ask my mom to extend the time to 1 hour but I still think that 30 minutes are not enough. Don't you think so? No? hmm... Okay, how did I get this far from Shell Shockers again? And I think it is enough. Bye or whatever!