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In Surviv.io, there is a squad. A squad is like a teamplay. Including me, there is four people. And it's pretty like a solo game. Everyone scatter apart, so it's much as a solo game with other three people who can save me. And it's updated, so, there is a normal spuad and of course, there is a updated squad there was a duo, but when the updated squad came out, the duo disappeared. And the updated squad is not a grass event, is a dessert event, so.......... you'll get the idea. It has too many airdorps
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A squad is like a teamplay. - A squad is like a team play. -You should separate the word "team play" since that's the proper format. Including me, there is four people. - There is four people including me. -Much better if you make it like this so no need to stop for the words "including me". so, there is a normal spuad and of course, there is a updated squad there was a duo, but when the updated squad came out, the duo disappeared. - So, there is a normal squad and of course, there is an updated squad. There was even a duo, but when the updated squad came out, the duo disappeared. -You should write the correct spelling of "squad" then it should be "an" because the next word is a vowel. You should also use the word even to emphasize your thought. is a dessert event, so.......... you'll get the idea. - it is a dessert, so... you'll get the idea about it. -You should only use 3 dots for this not excessive dots since it's not proper and also don't use the if you don't emphasize what idea is it. It's better to use about it so you can use the article of "the" It has too many airdorps - It has to many airdrops. -It should be "airdrops" be careful in your spelling. Surviv.io In Surviv.io, there is a squad. A squad is like a team play. And it's pretty like a solo game. Everyone scatter apart, so it's much as a solo game with other three people who can save me. There is four people including me. And it's updated, So, there is a normal squad and of course, there is an updated squad. There was even a duo, but when the updated squad came out, the duo disappeared. And the updated squad is not a grass event, it is a dessert, so... you'll get the idea about it. It has to many airdrops.