1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-09-10 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Surviv.io 내 용 The surviv.io is updated!(Wow...........:I) First, the solo play was updated and now, the squad is updated. To say about updated map, The pink trees are all over the place. And there are some trees that are green. When you crash it, you get black skin and sniper and bullet, The sniper is good when you are a master but, I prefer machine gun. And there is a time I made a team with some guy and we went to the bunker but there was a other guy with a vector and saiga-12. and I fighted with him because a guy who made team with me didn't have a gun. And I won! But the teammate throwed a bomb but I don't think he did this to me for real. After I died, I think he knew I was watching him and he signed a "I'm sorry" sign. So, I forgive him. 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-09-18 답변내용 To say about updated map, The pink trees are all over the place. - To say about the updated map, the pink trees are all over the place. -You don't need to make the word "The" capitalize after the comma. When you crash it, you get black skin and sniper and bullet, The sniper is good when you are a master but, I prefer machine gun. - When you crash it, you get black skin, sniper and bullet. The sniper is good when you are good at using this, but I prefer machine gun. -You shouldn't need to use the conjunction excessively and use comma for elaboration. You need to use appropriate word to match it in your sentence properly. there was a other guy with a vector and saiga-12. -there was an other guy with a vector and saiga-12. But the teammate throwed a bomb - But one of my teammate threw a bomb at me -You should use the proper past tense of "threw". There's no such thing of the word "throwed". And there is a time I made a team with some guy - And there was a time I made a team with some guy - Use past tense for this. - and I fight with him and I fought with him - Use the past tense of "fight" not fighted After I died, I think he knew I was watching him and he signed a "I'm sorry" sign. - After I died, I think he knew I was watching him and he signed at me "I'm sorry" sign. - Use "at" to emphasize a clear meaning. So, I forgive him. - So, I forgave him. - You should use the past tense of forgive because it is happened already. Surviv.io The surviv.io is updated!(Wow...........:I) First, the solo play was updated and now, the squad is updated. To say about the updated map, the pink trees are all over the place. And there are some trees that are green. When you crash it, you get black skin, sniper and bullet, the sniper is good when you are a good at using it, but I prefer machine gun. And there is a time I made a team with some guy and we went to the bunker but there was an other guy with a vector and saiga-12. and I fought with him because a guy who made team with me didn't have a gun. And I won! But the teammate threw a bomb at me but I don't think he did this to me for real. After I died, I think he knew I was watching him and he signed at me "I'm sorry" sign. So, I forgave him.