1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-08-27 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 rollingsky 내 용 There are many bug, so glitch in rollingsky. there is a portal which you get disappear. And when you get an flying item, And ignore the again appearing portalyou get killed. And when you not disappeared and go to a again appearing portal, you getkilled. This is too complicated. The answer is useless. glitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitchglitch OK, THE END 답변자 Jen2 답변일 2019-08-27 답변내용 rollingsky - The Rolling Sky -You need to capitalize the title and it's very specific so you need to use the article of "the". There are many bug, so glitch in rollingsky. -There are many bugs, so glitch in the rolling sky. - the subject must agrees with its number and you need to use the article of "the" because you are very specific not in general. there is a portal which you get disappeared. - There is a portal which you will disappear. -You need to use the future tense not the word "get" because it usually follows with direct/indirect object or it could be a location. And when you get an flying item, And ignore the again appearing portalyou get killed. And when you not disappeared and go to a again appearing portal, you getkilled. - When you get a flying killing device and ignore it then you'll be killed by this portal. If you didn't disappear and you will go again to this portal, you'll be killed. - You don't need to use the conjunction of "and" unless you are connecting two ideas. Most of all, you should use the word "then" to emphasize a result. No need to make the capitalization after the comma since you're expanding ideas. OK, THE END - Ok. The end. - No need to capitalize all the letters. The Rolling Sky There are many bugs, so glitch in the rolling sky. When you get a flying killing device and ignore it then you'll be killed by this portal. If you didn't disappear and you will go again to this portal, you'll be killed. This is too complicated. The answer is useless. Ok. The end.