1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-05-17 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 snowball.io, surviv.io 내 용 Okay, yesterday was my computer academy day. And my teacher dismissed the class. So, we had a time to play game.^^ :) And I played surviv.io. So, I played and I had saiga-12 and M249(It's THE best mix.) But! Unfortunately, My teacher said it was time to go to home. So, she turned off all the computers.(She had a computer herself which can turn off the computers at once. Now, let's go to the snowball.io again. (Ah, there is nothing to write, so, ((Let's go to the surviv.io.))(((Again))) Okay I wrote 10 lines so, I think it the THE END. ( Kidding,:) okay, okay. Now is the THE END.) BYE~~~~~~~ image view 답변자 Dem 답변일 2019-05-20 답변내용 * yesterday was my computer academy day. Corrected one : * It's Computer Academy Day yesterday. explanation: Make sure to Capitalize the title of specific or important name of an event when you write it in a sentence. * THE best mix.) corrected one : The best combo ( combination). explanation: We use "combo" when we refer to a good combination. * Also always be careful when using indefinite and definite pronouns ( a, an and the ). And please don't use a lot of symbols just to make your sentences cute. Just write properly they way everyone does. Practice using proper symbols or correct punctuation marks. It's my Computer Academy Day yesterday , so we had time to play a game. And I played surviv.io. So, I played and I had saiga-12 and M249(It's The best combo. But unfortunately, my teacher said it was time to go to home. So, she turned off all the computers.(She had a computer herself which can turn off all the computers at once.