1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2019-05-16 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Surviv.io 내 용 There is a bunker that is smaller than other bunkers. But the good thing about this bunker is there is two boxes. And the best part is one box has a vector or saiga-12(eeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!):) So, if a master goes in, your dead.( Unless you're master) But I prefer vector. Because sagia-12 is a shotgun, and shotgun is hard to aim when you suddenly met a enemy. But vector, in the other hand, you are able too kill the enemy right away. THE SURVIVAL END image view 답변자 Dem 답변일 2019-05-20 답변내용 * There is a bunker that is smaller than other bunkers. corrected one : There is a bunker that is smaller than others . explanation : Just use "others" a pronoun to mean the same thing. Also, we use pronouns for us not to repeat the same things ( names) again and again. * But the good thing about this bunker is there is two boxes corrected one : But the good thing about it is that this has two boxes. explanation : It would be better if ,you say " It has two boxes." instead of " There are two boxes." since you are telling me what it has. * And the best part is one box has a vector or saiga-12 corrected one : And the best part of it is that one of the boxes has Vector or Saiga-12, explanation : "one of the boxes" is the correct one. This refers to the boxes that THAT particular box belongs to. * Avoid using may symbols in sentences. Just use proper punctuation marks. * on the other hand not *in the other hand. * an enemy not * a enemy. There is a bunker that is smaller than others . But the good thing about it is that this has two boxes. And the best part of it is that one of the boxes has Vector or Saiga-12. So, if a master goes in, your dead.( Unless you're master, too). But I prefer vector because sagia-12 is a shotgun, and shotgun is hard to aim when you suddenly met an enemy. But vector, on the other hand, you are able too kill the enemy right away