1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-12-20 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 I have done the most normal thing in my whole life( or maybe not) I bought the cristmas gun with black and yellow. Without the ribon, it will be perfact. And I have download spiner.io. Is the game that you knock the other spiners. But really, I have won 160 games, even I downloaded yesterday. I have 7000coins. And the most expensive style is 10000coins. And they even have a package it costs \1,390. First 3day is free and after that you have to pay. THE END 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2018-12-21 답변내용 I have done the most normal thing in my whole life( or maybe not) (correct spacing ...'life (or maybe..)'/ missing punctuation [period]) >>I have done the most normal thing in my whole life (or maybe not). I bought the cristmas gun with black and yellow. (correct noun 'Christmas'/ correct preposition 'in') >>I bought a Christmas gun in black and yellow. Without the ribon, it will be perfact. (correct spelling 'ribbon', 'perfect') >>Without the ribbon, it will be perfect. And I have download spiner.io. (correct choices of words) >>And I have downloaded the 'spiner.io'. Is the game that you knock the other spiners. (correct choices of words) >>It's the game that you knock the other spinners. But really, I havewon 160 games, even I downloaded yesterday. (missing spacing ..'have won..'/ missing words) >>But really, I have won 160 games, even if I downloaded it just yesterday. I have 7000coins. (missing punctuation [comma]/ missing space '..000 coins') >>I have 7,000 coins. And the most expensive style is 10000coins. (missing punctuation [comma]/ missing space '..000 coins.') >>And the most expensive style is 10,000 coins. And they even have a package it costs \1,390. (correct choice of relative noun 'which'/ correct sign '$') >>And they even have a package which costs $1,390. First 3day is free and after that you have to pay. (missing words/ missing space '..3 days..') >>The first 3 days is free and after that you have to pay. THE END >> ACCEPTED << *NOTE : 1) Observe the corrections made. 2) Choose the correct words. 3) Put the correct spacing. 4) Use the correct sign. 5 ) Check the correct spelling. 6) Use the correct letter on the title : WRONG : shell shockers CORRECT : Shell Shockers