1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-12-17 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Whatever 내 용 I am really tired. What ever.oh! have I told you about the surviv.io? Than........ we can talk right now. It's very exciting. I think it's more fun than shell shockers.io. But, the funny part is that the game I like is all io games. shell shockers.io, surviv.io,slither.io.............. And when our school teacher allows a computer free time, she says no gun games, no killing games, no zombies, no nothing something violence. But all the game I knew is gun game or killing game games. Than what can I do? Our teacher can be really annoying sometimes. THE END 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2018-12-18 답변내용 I am really tired. >> CORRECT << What ever.oh! (unnecessary word iterjection 'oh') >>Whatever! oh! have I told you about the surviv.io? (correct formation of sentence) >>Oh, have I told you about the surviv.io? Than........ we can talk right now. (correct adverb 'Then') >>Then........ we can talk right now. It's very exciting. >> CORRECT << I think it's more fun than shell shockers.io. >> CORRECT << But, the funny part is that the game I like is all io games. >> CORRECT << shell shockers.io, surviv.io,slither.io.............. >>They are the shell shockers.io, surviv.io, and the slither.io.............. And when our school teacher allows a computer free time, she says no gun games, no killing games, no zombies, no nothing something violence. (unnecessary words) >>And when our school teacher allows a computer free time, she says no gun games, no killing games, no zombies, no to any violence. But all the game I knew is gun game or killing game games. (correct choice of words) >>But all the game I knew is either gun game or killing game games. Than what can I do? (correct adverb 'So') >>So, what can I do? Our teacher can be really annoying sometimes. >> CORRECT << THE END >> ACCEPTED << *NOTE : 1) Observe the corrections made. 2) Use the correct words. 3) Use a proper title and avoid using the same title. =================================================================================================================== Dear John, Teachers are not annoying. If there is no regulation, school would be so chaotic. Try to close your eyes and imagine.... Smile, Teacher Mea