1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-12-06 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Whatever 내 용 In shell shockers there is a new golden chicken. It gives more colur red, orange, and a lots of colurs. And gold coinsx2 per kill. In one kill, they 10, but if I buy golden chicken, they give 20. And best of all, NO MORE ADS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was tired about ads. But the bad part is that 9.99$. And the worst part is that it lasts for 30days. What is 30days!!!!!! It should be 1year. For paying 9.99$. THE END image view 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2018-12-06 답변내용 In shell shockers there is a new golden chicken. >> CORRECT << It gives more colur red, orange, and a lots of colurs. (correct spelling 'color'/ correct choices of words) >>It gives more color red, orange, and more different of colors. And gold coinsx2 per kill. In one kill, they 10, but if I buy golden chicken, they give 20. (correct choices of words) >>The gold coin is equivalent to two per kill. In one kill, they are equivalent to 10, but if I buy a golden chicken, they give 20. And best of all, NO MORE ADS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (correct number of exclamation point) >>And best of all, NO MORE ADS!!! I was tired about ads. (missing article 'the') >>I was tired about the ads. But the bad part is that 9.99$. (correct order of character '$9.99') >>But the bad part is that it's $9.99. And the worst part is that it lasts for 30days. (unnecessary words/ missing spacing '..30 days'.) >>The worst part is that it lasts for 30 days. What is 30days!!!!!! (missing article 'the'/ correct punctuation marks) >>What is the 30 days?!? It should be 1year. For paying 9.99$. (use of compound sentence) >>It should be 1 year for paying $9.99. THE END >> CORRECT << *NOTE : 1) Observe the corrections made. 2) Choose the correct words. 3) Put a space. 4) Use the correct usage of words. 5) Use the correct punctuation marks and special character/sign ($). 6) Put the word into its correct order. =================================================================================================================== Dear John, $9.99 is almost $10. Seriously?!? This is way expensive! What is that amount for anyway? Curious me, Teacher Mea P.S. You attached a picture. Who are you there? - Ditto -