1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-11-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 ................. 내 용 I earned 10400coins (finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) But my target's 1000000000000000(Oh, I am a big targeter) There is a Scrambler, Free Ranger, soldier, eggsploder. Scrambler is a character that uses shot gun. And Free Ranger is a character that uses sniper. And soldier is a character that uses machine gun. And finally egg sploder is a character that uses rocket gun. I prefor scrambler THE END image view 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2018-11-30 답변내용 I earned 10400coins (finally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) (missing comma/ correct number of exclamation point) >>I earned 10,400coins (Finally!!!) But my target's 1000000000000000(Oh, I am a big targeter) (missing punctuation [comma, period]) >>But my target's 1,000,000,000,000,000 (Oh, I am a big targeter.) There is a Scrambler, Free Ranger, soldier, eggsploder. (correct letter/ missing conjunction 'and') >>There is a Scrambler, Free Ranger, Soldier, and Eggsploder. Scrambler is a character that uses shot gun. (missing article 'a') >>Scrambler is a character that uses a shot gun. And Free Ranger is a character that uses sniper. (correct choices of words) >>The Free Ranger is a character that uses a sniper. And soldier is a character that uses machine gun. (correct choices of words) >>Then the soldier is a character that uses a machine gun. And finally egg sploder is a character that uses rocket gun. (correct choices of words) >>And finally, the eggsploder is a character that uses a rocket gun. I prefor scrambler (correct spelling 'prefer'/ missing punctuation [period]) >>I prefer to be the scrambler. THE END >> ACCEPTED << *NOTE : 1) Observe the corrections made. 2) Use the correct words. 3) Use the correct usage of words. 4) Check the correct spelling. 5) Put a title. 6) Use the correct punctuation marks. =================================================================================================================== Dear John, Is your topic about a video game? You attached a picture in this entry. Who are you in the picture? Smile, Teacher Mea