1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-10-30 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 ................. 내 용 In shell shockers, I feel richhhhhhhhhhh~~~~~~~~~ But I saw a guy that had a golden crown. And the golden crown costs 2000. And I have 6000 so I can buy like any hat except golden crown. And the golden crown is like..... don't fit in my shell? So I don't want to buy but I got to be really rich so I and buy like anthing? image view 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-10-31 답변내용 In shell shockers, I feel richhhhhhhhhhh~~~~~~~~~ >> Good sentence. But I saw a guy that had a golden crown. >> Good sentence. And the golden crown costs 2000. >> Good sentence. And I have 6000 so I can buy like any hat except golden crown. >> Good sentence. And the golden crown is like..... don't fit in my shell? >> Good sentence. So I don't want to buy but I got to be really rich so I and buy like anthing? >> So I don't want to buy but I got to be really rich so I and buy like anything? Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of your pronoun in your sentences. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care!