1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-10-29 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 ................. 내 용 Shell shockers is the best game in the whole wide world. My money is 6500 (ooh, that's a lot of money) The most expensive hat costs 20000. I can't afford it. If I didn't buy all the items, i would have 6500+500+6000=13500 But I bought all the guns and items. And I am going to buy halloween guns now.^^ Halloween guns costs 3000each. And that would be 3000x3=9000. And the bear guns costs 5000each. And that would be 5000x3=15000. But I don't have enough money and I don't want to buy any of the BEAR gun(ugh) 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-10-30 답변내용 Shell shockers is the best game in the whole wide world. >> Shell shocker is the best game in the whole wide world. My money is 6500 (ooh, that's a lot of money) >> I already have 6,500. (Ooh! that's a lot of money). The most expensive hat costs 20000. I can't afford it. >> Good sentence. :) If I didn't buy all the items, i would have 6500+500+6000=13500 >> If I didn't buy all the items, I would have 6500+500+6000=13500. But I bought all the guns and items. And I am going to buy halloween guns now. >> But I bought all the guns and items. And I am going to buy Halloween guns now. ^^ Halloween guns costs 3000each. >> ^^ Halloween guns cost 3000 each. And that would be 3000x3=9000. >> Good sentence. :) And the bear guns costs 5000each. >> Good sentence. :) And that would be 5000x3=15000. But I don't have enough money and I don't want to buy any of the BEAR gun(ugh) >> Good sentence. :) Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of articles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being use in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)