1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-10-23 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 ................. 내 용 In shell shockers, it was updated and It is halloween soon, so there is a pumpkin, psycho hat.( You know, who carrys a power saw and kills people with that) And gun is updated so is like black, bit green. And when I was playing shell shockers with my friends, shakeamah was keep killing me so I wondered who is this guy and why he is keep killing me? And I found out. It was my other friend. He was using shotgun so I just killed him with my machine gun. I killed him so much that my cash was 3200 before I play, but after I played, my cash was 4700(yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) image view 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-10-24 답변내용 In shell shockers, it was updated and It is halloween soon, so there is a pumpkin, psycho hat. ( You know, who carries a power saw and kills people with that) >> In shell shockers, it was updated and It is Halloween soon, so there is a pumpkin, psycho hat. And gun is updated so is like black, bit green. And when I was playing shell shockers with my friends, shakeamah was keep killing me so I wondered who is this guy and why he is keep killing me? >> And gun is updated so is like black, bit green. And when I was playing shell shockers with my friends, Shakeamah kept killing me so I wondered who is this guy and why he keeps killing me? And I found out. It was my other friend. >> Good sentence. :) He was using shotgun so I just killed him with my machine gun. >> Good sentence. :) I killed him so much that my cash was 3200 before I play, but after I played, my cash was 4700(yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >> Good sentence. :) Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of articles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being used in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)