1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-10-16 Weather    Feeling  Pain 제 목 ................. 내 용 I want to go to the sushi buffet. Because I like sushi so~~~~~~~~~~much. I can eat a three coruse breakfast, lunch, dinner of sushi. After school hours I have a class of computer. I play shell shockers when I do all my computer work. I the two guys who is sitting next to me said to me that he could login if my id and password. And I said yes So played shell shockers if me. (As you know, I have a upgraded machine gun, sniper and shotgun. So every one is envy on me) 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-10-17 답변내용 I want to go to the sushi buffet. >> Good sentence. :) Because I like sushi so~~~~~~~~~~much. >> Good sentence. :) I can eat a three coruse breakfast, lunch, dinner of sushi. >> I can eat three courses of breakfast, lunch, and dinner of sushi. After school hours I have a class of computer. >> Good sentence. :) I play shell shockers when I do all my computer work. >> Good sentence. :) I the two guys who an sitting next to me said to me that he could login if my id and password. And I said yes >> If the two guys who're sitting next to said to me that if he could use my ID and Password to log-in, and I told him yes. So played shell shockers if me. >> Good sentence. :) (As you know, I have a upgraded machine gun, sniper and shotgun. So every one is envy on me) >> Good sentence. :) Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of articles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being used in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)