1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-10-15 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 ................. 내 용 Am I good at shell shockers? Well, I can't judge myself! Because I'm too greedy to judge myself. I'm kidding. hahahahahahahahaha Who would say themself is greedy? Do you can judge yourself? I vote no Anyway back to the shell shockers, I have a lot of money in shell shockers, but I did not bought any gold coin from the real money. I have upgraded machine gun,shotgun and sniper. So it's easy to kill if upgraded guns.(Except the situation of enemy is so good then I can't defeat them.)^0^ image view 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-10-16 답변내용 Am I good at shell shockers? >> Good sentence! :) Well, I can't judge myself! Because I'm too greedy to judge myself. >> Good sentence! :) I'm kidding. hahahahahahahahaha >> I'm just kidding! hahaha Who would say themself is greedy? >> Who would say they are greedy? Do you can judge yourself? I vote no >> Can you judge yourself? I say no. Anyway back to the shell shockers, >> Good sentence! :) I have a lot of money in shell shockers, but I did not bought any gold coin from the real money. >> I have a lot of money in Shell shockers, but I did not buy any gold coins using real money. I have upgraded machine gun,shotgun and sniper. >> I upgraded my machine gun, shotgun and my sniper. So it's easy to kill if upgraded guns.(Except the situation of enemy is so good then I can't defeat them.)^0^ >> So, it's easy to kill if I am going to upgrade the guns. (Except a situation if the enemy is so good, then I can't defeat them) ^o^ Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of articles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being used in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)