1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-10-10 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 ................. 내 용 Do you know Alan Walker? I's the singer's name and I like him or her so much in shell shockers my character's name is Alan Walker too. And I bought upgraded shot gun too image view 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-10-11 답변내용 Do you know Alan Walker? >> Correct Sentence. :) I's the singer's name and I like him or her so much in shell shockers. >> Alan Walker is the name of a famous singer, I really like him in Shell Shockers. my character's name is Alan Walker too. >> My Avatar's name in Shell Shocker is Alan Walker, too. And I bought upgraded shot gun too >> In the game, I bought an upgraded shotgun as well. Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of articles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being used in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)