1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-09-17 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 ................. 내 용 Yeah~ alan walker is the best!!! OH yeah I like the spectre,alone,faded the best!!!! I'm not alone yeah baby!!!! Let's sing. ho! yeah~ Do you have any idol that you like? I'm going to sing in fornt of the class.(I think)Or not (maybe) 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-09-18 답변내용 Yeah~ alan walker is the best!!! >> Alan Walker is the best. Yeah! OH yeah I like the spectre,alone,faded the best!!!! >> Oh! Yeah! I like when the specter, alone faded it is the best. I'm not alone yeah baby!!!! >> I'm not alone, yeah baby! Let's sing. ho! >> Let's sing, Oh! yeah~ Do you have any idol that you like? >> Yeah! Do you have an idol that you like? I'm going to sing in fornt of the class. >> I'm going to sing in front of my class. (I think)Or not (maybe) >> I think or maybe not. Hello John! Thank you for writing in your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful of the use of articles /the/, /a/ and / an/. The article /the/ is being used in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and / an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertheless, you did a great job! Please continue writing in your diary! Take care! :)