1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-09-14 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 ................. 내 용 I wish to be a iron man or whatever Hah, Tell me, In the future can I be a Iron man? No?Well then I think I have to shut down my dream. Hw...... Do you wish to be a Iron women? (sigh)x 9999999999999999999 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-09-17 답변내용 I wish to be a iron man or whatever >> I wish to be Ironman or whatever. Hah, Tell me, In the future can I be a Iron man? >> Do you think I can be just like Ironman in the future? No?Well then I think I have to shut down my dream. >> No! Well then, I think I need to give up my dream. Hw...... Do you wish to be a Iron women? >> Do you want to be an Ironwoman? (sigh)x 9999999999999999999 Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of artciles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being use in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertherless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)