1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-09-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 ................. 내 용 Alan Walker Spectre's Hello,hello( NO thank you.) Can you hear me, as I scream your name(Yes I hear you.I listening to your music) Hello hello Do you need me,before I fade away(I don't need you)^^ Is this a place that I call home To find what I've become Walk along the path unknown We live,We love,We lie 답변자 kristina 답변일 2018-09-12 답변내용 Alan Walker Spectre's >> Good sentence. :) Hello,hello( NO thank you.) >> Hello! Hello! (no thank you!). Can you hear me, as I scream your name(Yes I hear you.I listening to your music) >> Can you hear me? As I calling your name? (Yes, I can hear you while listening to your music.) Hello hello >> Hello! Hello! Do you need me,before I fade away(I don't need you)^^ >> Do you need me, before I go away. (I don't need you) ^^ Is this a place that I call home >> Is this a place that I call my home? To find what I've become >> Good sentence. :) Walk along the path unknown >> Walking along the path of the unknown. We live,We love,We lie >> Good sentence. :) Hello John! Thank you for writing on your diary again. Here's my feedback regarding your diary, please be mindful with the use of artciles /the/, /a/ and /an/. The article /the/ is being use in the sentence to make it complete and to have your sentences a clear idea while, /a/ and /an/ are being used as determiners. These 2 determines what you are pertaining to your thoughts or ideas. I would also like you to try to improve your vocabulary words at the same time, for you to be able to express your thoughts better. Nevertherless, you did a great job! Please continue writing on your diary! Take care! :)