1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-07-04 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Rolling sky 내 용 When I want to clear the level Perfectly, I have to get the diamonds. In some level I have to collect 20 diamonds and some level I have to collect 10 diamonds. But I don't care about diamonds, I care about how many percents I have gone. But sometimes I care about diamonds but usally I don't care about diamonds or whatever. But if you play rolling sky if me, you will give up in 30minutes. But if you practice, then....... that could be a another story. But I have no time. I have to practice violin, I have to study math....... but sometimes I practice. s~ome times^^ Ok I think it's enough for to day. BYE~ THE END 답변자 ammy 답변일 2018-07-04 답변내용 When I want to clear the level Perfectly, I have to get the diamonds. In some level I have to collect 20 diamonds and some level I have to collect 10 diamonds. But I don't care about diamonds, I care about how many percents I have gone. But sometimes I care about diamonds but usally I don't care about diamonds or whatever. But if you play rolling sky if me, you will give up in 30minutes. But if you practice, then....... that could be a another story. But I have no time. I have to practice violin, I have to study math....... but sometimes I practice. s~ome times^^ Ok I think it's enough for to day. BYE~ THE END In some level I have to collect 20 diamonds and some level I have to collect 10 diamonds. At some level I have to collect 20 diamonds and some level I have to collect 10 diamonds -Used a preposition " At " instead of " In " . But sometimes I care about diamonds but usally I don't care about diamonds or whatever. But sometimes I care about diamonds, but usually I don't care about diamonds or whatever. - Put a comma (,) after a time expression used in the beginning of a sentence. - MAke sure that your spelling is correct U-S-U-A-L-L-Y. that could be a another story. That could be a another story. -Capitalized the word " That ". I have to practice violin, I have to practice the violin, -Used " the " before the subject. but sometimes I practice. But sometimes I practice. -Capitalized the word " But ", becasue it is the start of the sentence. Ok I think it's enough for to day. Ok, I think it's enough for today. -Put a comma (,) after a time expression used in the beginning of a sentence. When I want to clear the level Perfectly, I have to get the diamonds. At some level I have to collect 20 diamonds and some level I have to collect 10 diamonds. But I don't care about diamonds, I care about how many percents I have gone. But sometimes I care about diamonds, but usually I don't care about diamonds or whatever. But if you play rolling sky if me, you will give up in 30minutes. But if you practice, then. That could be a another story. But I have no time. I have to practice the violin. I have to study math. But sometimes I practice, some times^^ Ok, I think it's enough for today. BYE~ THE END Teacher Micha.