1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2018-06-27 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 shell shockers 내 용 Shell shockers is very hard, but I think I got it master. It takes months to be master (Especially when you are playing computer at weekend. My mom makes me play computer at the weekend. I don't know why. Mom says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. I agree with that but ah, I want to do it everyday. And my dream is conneted with computer. But I think it's not a good idea. It's bad for my health. Heh Heh^^; And my mom is doing it for my own good.) Okay, how did I come this far from shell shockers? Even I didn't know.^^; sorry~ But when I get deep in one title, before I know it, I just get deeper. Okay I think it's enough for today. Bye~ ^^ image view 답변자 ammy 답변일 2018-06-28 답변내용 Shell shockers is very hard, but I think I got it master. It takes months to be master (Especially when you are playing computer at weekend. My mom makes me play computer at the weekend. I don't know why. Mom says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. I agree with that but ah, I want to do it everyday. And my dream is conneted with computer. But I think it's not a good idea. It's bad for my health. Heh Heh^^; And my mom is doing it for my own good.) Okay, how did I come this far from shell shockers? Even I didn't know.^^; sorry~ But when I get deep in one title, before I know it, I just get deeper. Okay I think it's enough for today. Bye~ ^^ Shell shockers is very hard, but I think I got it master. Shell shockers are very hard, but I think I got it mastered -Used the plural form " are " instead of " is " because it is more than one. -Used the past tense " mastered". It takes months to be master (Especially when you are playing computer at weekend. It takes months to be master especially when you are playing the computer at the weekend. -Use article " the ". I agree with that but ah, I want to do it everyday. I agree with that, but ah, I want to do it every day. -Put a comma (,) after a time expression used in the beginning of a sentence. And my dream is conneted with computer. And my dream is connected with computer. -Make sure that your spelling is corret C-O-N-N-E-C-T-E-D. Heh Heh^^; -Remove Heh Heh and replace it on HeHe. Okay I think it's enough for today. Bye~ ^^ Okay, I think it's enough for today. Bye. -Put a comma (,) after a time expression used in the beginning of a sentence. Shell shockers are very hard, but I think I got it mastered. It takes months to be master (Especially when you are playing the computer at the weekend. My mom makes me play computer at the weekend. I don't know why . Mom says it's bad for my eyes, it's true. I agree with that, but ah, I want to do it every day. And my dream is connected with computer. But I think it's not a good idea. It's bad for my health. He Heh^^; And my mom is doing it for my own good.) Okay, how did I come this far from shell shockers? Even I didn't know. ^^; sorry~ But when I get deep in one title, before I know it, I just get deeper. Okay, I think it's enough for today. Bye~ ^^ Teacher Micha