1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-11-30 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Rider 내 용 I want to earn robin, and hyper. And max is the car that I have already but I like best. And I earned hyper. But master use robin often. And I like it. Jeep is heavy so is hard to move.And racer is common but I like it And they have level and I goen to 9level is difficult There is a moveing track, and therea saw, and blablabla...... Anyway, you just have to know that is difficult (Is almost ten lines! I can't wait until ten lines. Actually I don't have any Idea to share.) I don't have any idea to share. So, ByeBye~ THE END image view 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-12-01 답변내용 I want to earn robin, and hyper. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! And max is the car that I have already but I like best. >>>>>>> Max is the car that I have already, but I like the best. And I earned hyper. >>>>>> I earned robin. But master use robin often. And I like it. >>>>>>> But master use robin often and I like it. Jeep is heavy so is hard to move. >>>>> Jeep is heavy so it is hard to move. And racer is common but I like it >>> Race is common but I like it. And they have level >>>>>> They have levels. and I goen to 9level >>>>>> I am level 9. is difficult >>>>> It is difficult. There is a moveing track, and therea saw, and blablabla...... >>>>> There is a moving track and a saw, and more. Anyway, you just have to know that is difficult >>>>> Anyway, you just have to know that it is difficult. (Is almost ten lines! >>>> It is almost ten lines! I can't wait until ten lines. >>>>>> Correct sentence! Actually I don't have any Idea to share.) >>>>> Actually, I don't have any idea to share. I don't have any idea to share. >>>>> I don't have any ideas to share. So, Bye Bye! THE END >>> Proper closing! Hi John! Thank you for sharing about the game. However, it would’ve been better if you told me about your day or your school. Try to share about other things. Hope to read something more interesting next time! Some sentences needed corrections on spelling and using pronouns. Teacher Bella