1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-11-29 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Rider 내 용 In Rider, I can buy a new car. But mom won't let me to play Rider I have to hurry up.Be cause it's 9:30. You can say "you not have to hurry up. You have 20 minute." Don't you know anything! Mom said time is gold. So 20 minute is like 40 gold. So is important. I think you don't care about the time. Do you? You can say "I do not!" Then I'll say "yes you do!" (t's almost ten lines. actually, I don't have any idea to share with you. Sorry.) Then you can say "It's okay" Ten I'llsay like " Is not okay!" For me is like study. THE END 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-11-30 답변내용 In Rider, I can buy a new car. >>>>> Correct sentence! But mom won't let me to play Rider >>>>>> But my mom won’t let me play Rider. I have to hurry up.Be cause it's 9:30. >>>>>> I have to hurry up because it’s 9:30. You can say "you not have to hurry up. You have 20 minute." >>>>> You can say, “You don’t have to hurry up. You have 20 minutes”. Don't you know anything! >>>>> Don't you know anything? Mom said time is gold. >>>>> My mom said time is gold. So 20 minute is like 40 gold. >>>>>> So 20 minutes is like 40 gold. So is important. >>>>>> So it is important. I think you don't care about the time. Do you? >>>>> I think you don’t care about time, do you? You can say "I do not!" >>>>>>> You can say “I do not!” Then I'll say "yes you do!" >>>>> Then I'll say "Yes you do!" (t's almost ten lines. >>>>> It's almost ten lines. actually, I don't have any idea to share with you. >>>>>> Actually, I don't have any idea to share with you. Sorry.) >>>> I’m sorry. Then you can say "It's okay" >>>>> Then, you can say "It's okay." Ten I'llsay like " Is not okay!" >>>> Then, I’ll say “It is not okay!” For me is like study. >>>>>> For me, it is like studying. THE END Hi John! Thank you for writing again. I commend you on writing often. However, I observed that you tend to write about similar topics. Thus, try to write about another topic, such as your friends, your experiences in school, etc. Minor lapses were noted on subject-verb agreement and sentence patterns. Teacher Bella