1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-11-23 Weather    Feeling  Gloomy 제 목 Rider 내 용 Rider is good because it's make me smart. (I think) Mom said game is a game, forget it! MOM. Is a car game. Don't you know anything?! Is a CAR game. Not just a game. And game is good because it makes me fun. is not good as a book, but, came on!!!! Mom is naging i am playing a game to much, but came on!!!!! mom is naging for not writeing mom's good. But, came on!!!! I have to hurry up, It's almost time for my class.(it's 9:46) (It's almost ten lines!!! I can't wait to play) You don't have to know abot playing. It's ten lines. ByeBye!!!!~ THE END 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-11-23 답변내용 Rider is good because it's make me smart. (I think) >>>>>> Correct sentences! Mom said game is a game, >>>>>> My mom said game is a game. forget it! MOM. >>>> Forget it mom! Is a car game. >>>>>> It is a car game. Don't you know anything?! >>>>> Correct sentence! Is a CAR game. >>>>>>> It is a car game. Not just a game. >>>>>> It is not just a game. And game is good because it makes me fun. >>>>> Games are good because it is fun. is not good as a book, but, came on!!!! >>>>> It is not good as a book, but come on!!!! Mom is naging i am playing a game to much, >>>>>> My mom is nagging me because I play a game too much. but came on!!!!! >>>> Come on mom! mom is naging for not writeing >>>>> My mom is nagging for not writing. mom's good. But, came on!!!! >>>> I think that is good but I don’t want to do it. I have to hurry up, >>>>>>> I have to hurry up. It's almost time for my class. >>>> Correct sentence! (it's 9:46) >>>>>> It's 9:46. (It's almost ten lines!!! >>>>>> It's almost ten lines!!! I can't wait to play) >>>>> I can't wait to play. You don't have to know abot playing. >>>>>>>> You don't have to know about playing. It's ten lines. >>>>>> Its ten lines. ByeBye!!!!~ THE END >>>>> They are properly used! Good job! Hi John! Thank you for writing. I agree with your mom to not play games too much. You must manage your time well. Most sentences were correctly constructed. Thumbs up! Check out the corrections to improve writing skills. Hope to hear more from you! Teacher Bella