1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-11-11 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 league of legend 내 용 Today I will talk about the game 'league of legend'. It is called LOL. It is very famous. I played it on August. When I tried, it was not so interesting but when I tried it more, I think it was very exciting. I like characters who can kill enemies easily and run away easily. I usally use Talon. It is strong and fast but it's body is weak. I hate fighting with tanker because they are very healthy and strong. I hope I can be talon master. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-11-13 답변내용 Today I will talk about the game 'league of legend'. (missing punctuation [comma]/ correct letter 'League of Legends'/ correct spelling 'Legends') >>Today, I will talk about the game 'League of Legends'. It is called LOL. >> CORRECT << It is very famous. >> CORRECT << I played it on August. (correct preposition 'in') >>I played it in August. When I tried, it was not so interesting but when I tried it more, I think it was very exciting. (more appropriate words) >> ACCEPTED << >>When I tried the first time, it was not so interesting but when I played it the second time, I think it was very exciting. I like characters who can kill enemies easily and run away easily. >> CORRECT << I usally use Talon. (correct spelling 'usually') >>I usually use Talon. It is strong and fast but it's body is weak. (correct pronoun 'its') >>It is strong and fast but its body is weak. I hate fighting with tanker because they are very healthy and strong. (correct adjective 'powerful') >>I hate fighting with tanker because they are very powerful and strong. I hope I can be talon master. (missing article 'a'/ correct letter 'Talon') >>I hope I can be a Talon master. *NOTE : 1) Use a capital letter on proper noun : League of Legend 2) Use a capital letter on title : WRONG : league of legend CORRECT : League of Legends 3) Check the correct spelling : WRONG : league of legend CORRECT : League of Legends 4) Make sure to be precise to important details (eg. name, figures/ numbers, etc.). =================================================================================================================== Dear Daniel, Is League of Legends an example of DOTA? Do you know DOTA? I wonder if you play Starcraft and Warcraft. Which one is better by the way? Curious me, Teacher Mea