1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-11-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 changing academy 내 용 Today I will talk about my academy. I think I will change my academy soon. Because she thought that this is not the best academy for me. We will go to bridge English academy and ssen math academy. I tested English at bridge on last tuesday. There were many questions. It was almost one hundred questions. I thought that I get good score and I did. I got top second class score. Next I tested math at ssen academy on 2 weeks before. I got top class score. I think I am only good at math. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-11-06 답변내용 Today I will talk about my academy. (missing punctuation [comma]) >>Today, I will talk about my academy. I think I will change my academy soon. >> CORRECT << Because she thought that this is not the best academy for me. >> ACCEPTED << >> But, who thought it so? We will go to bridge English academy and ssen math academy. (correct verb 'went'/ correct letter 'Bridge', 'Ssen') >>We went to Bridge English Academy and Ssen Math Academy. I tested English at bridge on last tuesday. (correct choices of words) >>I took a test on English at the Bridge last Tuesday. There were many questions. >> CORRECT << It was almost one hundred questions. >> CORRECT << I thought that I get good score and I did. (correct verb 'got'/ missing article 'a') >>I thought that I got a good score and I did. I got top second class score (correct choices of words) >>I got the Top 2 rank in the class. Next I tested math at ssen academy on 2 weeks before. (missing punctuation [comma]/ correct choices of words) >>Next, I had a test in Math at Ssen academy two (2) weeks before. I got top class score. (missing article 'the') >>I got the top class score. I think I am only good at math. >> CORRECT << *NOTE : 1) Use a capital letter on proper noun (eg. Bridge, Ssen). 2) Use the correct punctuation. 3) Choose the correct choices of words. 4) Use a capital letter on the title : WRONG : changing academy CORRECT : Changing Academy =================================================================================================================== Dear Daniel, CONGRATULATIONS! I'm very happy for you. Did you already celebrate this success? You will be an expert in English as well, I promise you. Just give yourself a time, and be more patient. I look forward to your next victory. I salute you, Teacher Mea