1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-08-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 micheal phelps vs great white shark 내 용 Today I will talk about micheal phelps and great white shark's race. Micheal phelps is one of the best swimmers in the world. He raced with simulation of great white shark. He used special swimsuits and fins. They mimicked sharks body. They raced 100 meters. great white shark finished in 36 seconds while phelps finished raced in 38 seconds. I think someone who can win shark will appear after time pass. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-08-25 답변내용 Today I will talk about micheal phelps and great white shark's race. >>Today, I will talk about Michael Phelps and the Great White Shark's race. Micheal phelps is one of the best swimmers in the world. >>Michael Phelps is one of the best swimmers in the world. He raced with simulation of great white shark. >>He raced with the simulation of the great white shark. He used special swimsuits and fins. >>He used a special swimsuit and fins. They mimicked sharks body. >>It mimicked the shark's skin. They raced 100 meters. >>They raced for 100 meters. great white shark finished in 36 seconds while phelps finished raced in 38 seconds. >>The great white shark finished in 36 seconds while Phelps finished the race in 38 seconds. I think someone who can win shark will appear after time pass. >>I think someone who can win over the shark will appear after the time pass. *NOTE : 1) Observe and study the corrections. 2) Check the correct spelling. 3) Choose the correct words. 4) Make your own sentence instead of copying lines from the article. 5) Use a capital letter on the title : WRONG : micheal phelps vs great white shark CORRECT : Michael Phelps vs Great White Shark ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, Whose Korean swimmer do you think can do what Michael Phelps did? Who do you think the next Ppark Tae-hwan of South Korea? I'm looking forward to meet the next great swimmer of the world coming from your country. Who could it be? Wondering, Teacher Mea