1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-08-06 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 youtube 내 용 Today I will talk about youtube. Youtube is a page that shows many interesting videos. I usually watch music videoes, scary videoes, funny videoes and television videoes. I watched tv program videoes last time. Program's name is new western. I also watched game videoes. In youtube, many people show their game videoes. I usually watch maplestory and league of legend. I hope another videoes will open soon. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-08-07 답변내용 Today I will talk about youtube. (missing punctuation [comma]/ correct letter 'YouTube') >>Today, I will talk about YouTube. Youtube is a page that shows many interesting videos. (correct choices of words) >>YouTube is a website that shows many interesting videos. I usually watch music videoes, scary videoes, funny videoes and television videoes. (correct spelling 'videos') >>I usually watch music videos, scary and funny videos, as well as TV series. I watched tv program videoes last time. (correct letter 'TV'/ unnecessary words) >>I watched a TV program last time. Program's name is new western. (missing article 'The'/ correct choices of words/ correct letters 'New Western') >>The program's name is 'New Western'. I also watched game videoes. (correct order of words) >>I also watched video games. In youtube, many people show their game videoes. (correct choices of words) >>In this site, many people show their online video games. I usually watch maplestory and league of legend. (missing spacing 'Maple Story'/ correct letters 'Maple Story', 'League of Legends') >>I usually watch Maple Story and League of Legends. I hope another videoes will open soon. (correct choices of words) >>I hope that another videos will come out soon. *NOTE : 1) Use the correct lettering when writing a proper noun. WRONG : youtube CORRECT : YouTube 2) Proper noun is a specific name of person, animal, things, places, events, etc.. 3) Choose the correct words. 4) Study the correct usage of words. 5) Review the usage of Parts of speech : - noun - pronoun - verb - prepositions - article (a, an, the) - adjective - adverb - conjunction 6) Check the correct spelling. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, My favorite past time when I am online is to watch a music video. Also, I enjoy watching commercial ads like Adidas, iPhone, and other fun product endorsements. They are like movies, made to be short. Since you are into videos, why not try your own video. What do you think? Be looking forward, Teacher Mea