1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-08-01 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 league of legend 내 용 Today I will talk about the game "league of legend". I tried it first on last Saturday. It was little hard at first time but after I practiced it until today, it become easier than that day. Also, I found my favorite character. Its name is twisted fate. It is little strange name. It uses card for weapons. He shoot cards to other characters. I will practice this character a lot. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-08-02 답변내용 Today I will talk about the game "league of legend". (missing punctuation [comma]/ correct letters 'League of Legends') >>Today, I will talk about the game "League of Legends". I tried it first on last Saturday. (unnecessary preposition 'on') >>I tried it first last Saturday. It was little hard at first time but after I practiced it until today, it become easier than that day. (unnecessary words/ correct verb 'became') >>It was a little hard at first but after I practiced it until today, it became easier than that day. Also, I found my favorite character. >> CORRECT << Its name is twisted fate. (correct letters 'Twisted Fate') >>Its name is Twisted Fate. It is little strange name. (missing article 'a') >>It is a little strange name. It uses card for weapons. >> CORRECT << He shoot cards to other characters. >> CORRECT << I will practice this character a lot. >> CORRECT << *NOTE : 1) Observe the corrections and apply them the next time you write. 2) Study the correct usage of words. 3) Title should start in capital letter : WRONG : league of legend CORRECT : League of Legends ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, League of legend must be 'League of Legends'. Isn't it? Make sure to right the correct letters and correct spelling of proper noun. A proper noun is a specific name that starts in capital letter. Is it a violent game, anyway? Waiting, Teacher Mea