1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-07-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Haikyu 내 용 Today I will talk about Haikyu. Haikyu is animation about volleyball. Main character's name is Hinata. His position is middle blocker. He is short but he became ace of his team. His best friend is kageyama. His position is setter. Setter is position that tossing to other spikers. Kageyama is genius of volleyball. His service is strong. His set up is very good. Also he is good at spike and blocking too. I think Haikyu is very fun. I hope next series come out fast. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-07-21 답변내용 Today I will talk about Haikyu. (missing punctuation [comma]) >>Today, I will talk about Haikyu. Haikyu is animation about volleyball. (missing words) >>Haikyu is a Japanese animation about volleyball. Main character's name is Hinata. (missing article 'The') >>The main character's name is Hinata. His position is middle blocker. >> CORRECT << He is short but he became ace of his team. (missing punctuation [comma]/ missing article 'the') >>He is short, but he became the ace of his team. His best friend is kageyama. (correct letter 'Kageyama') >>His best friend is Kageyama. His position is setter. (correct choices of words) >>Kageyana's position is setter. Setter is position that tossing to other spikers. (correct choices of words) >>Setter is a position in volleyball that do the tossing of the ball to other spikers. Kageyama is genius of volleyball. (correct preposition 'in') >>Kageyama is genius in volleyball. His service is strong. >> CORRECT << His set up is very good. (unnecessary preposition 'up') >>His set is very good. Also he is good at spike and blocking too. (missing comma [comma]) >>Also, he is good at spike and blocking, too. I think Haikyu is very fun. >> CORRECT << I hope next series come out fast. (missing article 'the'/ missing modal verb 'will') >>I hope the next series will come out fast. *NOTE : 1) Study the corrections made. 2) Choose the correct choices of words. 3) Observe the correct usage of words. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, It's good to read something again in your diary. I like the story since you already know that I love volleyball. Update me, are you a volleyball player? What is your position? Happy weekend, Teacher Mea