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At home, I had a big pen. A size about 10 times for normal pen. When I took took that pan to school, my friend surprised. But i'm not surprised. Because I had seen that pen almost 100 times. And every friend see it thay want to use it.
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At home, I had a big pen. >>>>> Correct sentence! A size about 10 times for normal pen. >>>>>> The size is about 10 times larger than the normal pen. When I took took that pan to school, my friend surprised. >>>>>> When I brought the pen to school, my friend was surprised. But i'm not surprised. Because I had seen that pen almost 100 times. >>>>> But I was not because I had seen it almost 100 times. And every friend see it thay want to use it. >>>>> Every friend who saw it wants to use it. Hey John! Thank you for sharing an interesting story. I wonder what the pen looks like. Can I see it? I remember that my uncle had a big pen before. I was amazed when I saw it before. It looks like a giant¡¯s pencil. Hehehehe ^^ Regarding your grammar, you need to review more on verbs and word choices. Keep them stories coming! Teacher Bella