1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-06-06 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 soccer 내 용 Today I will talk about what I did at schoolyard. It was raining today but I went out and played soccer with friends. First, there were many people at school yard so me and my friends go to school backyard. I played soccer at background for about 30 minutes. After 30 minutes, people were all gone so we went to school yard. There were 6 people who were playing soccer. We played together with them. 3 were older than us and 3 were younger than us. I think it was very cool because rain water our clothes. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-06-06 답변내용 Hi Daniel! You are certainly improving in writing grammatically correct sentences. I hope that you can apply the same in speaking. Please continue your progress by writing more and paying attention to complex sentences. Keep going! T. Maribel **************************************************************************************************************************** Today I will talk about what I did at schoolyard. -correct- It was raining today but I went out and played soccer with friends. -correct- First, there were many people at school yard so me and my friends go to school backyard. *** First, there were many people at school yard so me and my friends went to the school backyard. I played soccer at background for about 30 minutes. *** I played soccer at the backyard for about 30 minutes. After 30 minutes, people were all gone so we went to school yard. -correct- There were 6 people who were playing soccer. -correct- We played together with them. -correct- 3 were older than us and 3 were younger than us. -correct- I think it was very cool because rain water our clothes. *** I think it was very cool because the rain watered our clothes.