1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-05-26 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 academy 내 용 Today I will talk about what I studied in academy. I studied English today. We read 3 stories and translate stories. Story was about Surma tribe's make up. Many woman do make up to look more beautiful. But Surma tribe's beautiful standard is little unusual. They think white and some shapes like triangle is beautiful. Next stories was also about tribe. The tribe's name is Bororo. Bororo have unusual tradition. The man dance and women can choose the men. Men can have a lot of women. I think there are many tribes that have unusual tradition. 답변자 ts0132 답변일 2017-05-26 답변내용 Hi Daniel! The way you construct your sentences have improved. Keep up the good work and don't forget to review the corrections. Have a good weekend. T. Maribel ============================================================================================================================= Today I will talk about what I studied in academy. -correct- I studied English today. -correct- We read 3 stories and translate stories. -correct- Story was about Surma tribe's make up. -correct - Many woman do make up to look more beautiful. *** Many woman put on a make up to look more beautiful. But Surma tribe's beautiful standard is little unusual. -correct- They think white and some shapes like triangle is beautiful. -correct- Next stories was also about tribe. *** Next story was also about a tribe. The tribe's name is Bororo. -correct- Bororos have unusual tradition. -correct- The man dance and women can choose the men. -correct- Men can have a lot of women. -correct- I think there are many tribes that have unusual tradition. -correct-