1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-05-25 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 My best friend 내 용 My best friend is yoo chan. He's pretty fun and he always follow's me. At recess, he always come to my writing table. I wonder when we became estranged from each other. I think yoo chan just came to me when we take a picture. I want to be best friend with seojin. But when yoo chan know this, he will smash me in to pieces. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-05-26 답변내용 My best friend is yoo chan. >>>>> My best friend is Yoo Chan. He's pretty fun and he always follow's me. >>>>> He's pretty fun and he always follows me. At recess, he always come to my writing table. >>>>>> At recess, he always comes to my writing table. I wonder when we became estranged from each other. >>>>>>> I wonder when we became estranged from each other. [ I am confused because estrange means make unfriendly. So, is he not your friend anymore?] I think yoo chan just came to me when we take a picture. >>>>>> I think Yoo Chan first came to me when we’re take pictures. I want to be best friend with seojin. >>>>>> I want to be best friend with Seo Jin. But when yoo chan know this, he will smash me in to pieces. >>>>>> But when Yoo Chan knows this, he will smash me to pieces. Hi John! Thank you for sharing about Yoo Chan. I like that you used metaphor. However, I have a confusion regarding your relationship with Yoo Chan. Are you still best friends? Sentences needed little polishing on capitalization and subject-verb agreement, but they were arranged well. Keep them stories coming! Teacher Bella