1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-05-10 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Sports day 내 용 I have a sports day today. I played racing, rope pulling. When I play racing, I finished fourth among the six, and in the rope pulling,we, white team keep losing. In the end, I didn't play but my friend play a other racing. How to play relay is 1 class choose the fastest girl and boy, and they play a relay,and there is 6 class and a total of 12 persons will participate. I visit the library often because I really enjoy reading books. Last weekend, I went to library and lend some books to read. Usually, my favorite genre is literature and philosophy so this time, I lend a book which is philosphy literature named 'Mysterious book with trump cards.' The title is very interesting and also, the author is the one who wrote 'Sofie's verden', the famouse philosophy literature book. It is literature but also a philosophy, so some paragraps are difficult to understand. But it make me think more deeply, so I really enjoying reading this. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-05-11 답변내용 I have a sports day today. >>>>>>> Correct sentence! I played racing, rope pulling. >>>>>> I played racing and tug-of-war. ( Tug-of-war means a contest in which teams pull of opposite ends of a rope; the team dragged across a central line loses When I play racing, I finished fourth among the six, and in the rope pulling,we, white team keep losing. >>>>> When I played racing, I finished fourth among the six contestants. In tug-of-war, white team keeps losing. In the end, I didn't play but my friend play a other racing. >>>>>>> In the end, I didn’t play but my friend participated in racing. How to play relay is 1 class choose the fastest girl and boy, and they play a relay,and there is 6 class and a total of 12 persons will participate. >>>>>>>>> This is how we played relay. 1st class chose the fastest girl and boy, and they played. There are 6 classes and a total of 12 persons will participate. I visit the library often because I really enjoy reading books. >>>>> Correct sentence! Last weekend, I went to library and lend some books to read. >>>> Last weekend, I went to the library and borrowed some books to read. Usually, my favorite genre is literature and philosophy so this time, I lend a book which is philosphy literature named 'Mysterious book with trump cards.' >>>>>>> Usually, my favorite genres are literature and philosophy. But this time, I borrowed a book which is philosophy literature named “Mysterious Book with Trump Cards”. The title is very interesting and also, the author is the one who wrote 'Sofie's verden', the famouse philosophy literature book. >>>>>> The title is very interesting and also, the author is the one who wrote Sophie’s World, the famous philosophy book. It is literature but also a philosophy, so some paragraps are difficult to understand. >>>>> It is literature but also a philosophy, so some paragraphs are difficult to understand. But it make me think more deeply, so I really enjoying reading this. >>>>> But it makes me think more deeply, so I really enjoying reading this. Hi John! Thank you for sharing about your sports day. By the way, did Esther write the story about library? Sentences were arranged well. But polishing was still needed on word usage. Keep them fun stories coming! Teacher Bella