1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-05-09 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 excursion 내 용 My family went to the excursion and lots of people find a treasure and have a track meet. I can't find a treasure but some younger brother gave me a treasure. In the track meet there's a toy you just pull the rope and a who flys the helicopter farthest wll win. So I fly the helicopter farthest and my team won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Today, I didn't go to school because we had a presidential election. We exprienced failed president already, that why I hope we can have better leamorning. A few days ago, Frence's new preident was elected, and I can feel their straightfowarded minds.der for our country more desperatly. The election already finished at 8:00 p.m., so the result will come out tomorrow. Whoever elected for a new president, we wish he or she could lead this country well. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-05-10 답변내용 My family went to the excursion and lots of people find a treasure and have a track meet. >>>>> My family went to the excursion and lots of people find treasures and have a track meet. I can't find a treasure but some younger brother gave me a treasure. >>>>> I couldn't find a treasure but a younger brother gave me a treasure. In the track meet there's a toy you just pull the rope and a who flys the helicopter farthest wll win. >>>>> In the track meet, there's a toy you just pull the rope and the one who flies the helicopter farthest will win. So I fly the helicopter farthest and my team won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >>>>>> I flew the helicopter farthest and my team won!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Today, I didn't go to school because we had a presidential election. >>>>>> Correct sentence! We exprienced failed president already, that why I hope we can have better leamorning. >>>>>>> We experienced failed president already, that why I hope we can learn better. A few days ago, Frence's new preident was elected, and I can feel their straightfowarded minds.der for our country more desperatly. >>>>>>>> A few days ago, France's new president was elected, and I can feel their care for their country. The election already finished at 8:00 p.m., so the result will come out tomorrow. Whoever elected for a new president, we wish he or she could lead this country well. >>>>>>> Correct sentences! Hi John! Thank you for sharing your fun day! Congratulations on winning! Sentences were constructed properly, but be mindful of word choices and spelling. Hope to hear from you again! Teacher Bella