1 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-31 2 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-30 3 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-23 4 Brawl Stars 2020-03-19 5 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-13 6 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-12 7 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-11 8 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-03 9 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-03-02 10 A kinda long summary of today's article (hehe) 2020-02-28 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임예빈 작성일 2017-04-28 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 school 내 용 I like school, because sometime my classmate bring something interesting. These days my classmate bring a toy that called 'spiner'. That just spin like a top. How to play is spin and more and more tops win. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2017-04-28 답변내용 I like school, because sometime my classmate bring something interesting. >>>>>> I like school, because sometimes, my classmates bring something interesting. These days my classmate bring a toy that called 'spiner'. >>>>>>> These days, my classmate brings a toy that called spinner. That just spin like a top. >>>>>> It spins like a top. How to play is spin and more and more tops win. >>>>>>> You play the game by spinning it and the winner is the one that spins the longest. Hi John! Thank you for sharing! I remember that it is the toy that you want to have. Sentences were arranged well, but still needed polishing to be organized and clear. Check out the corrections to improve writing. Teacher Bella