1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-04-02 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 songs 내 용 Today I will talk about songs that I listen. First, I hear maroon 5's songs. Maps, Sugar, Never ganna leave this bed. These are my favorite maroon 5's songs. Next, I hear EXO's songs. Artificial love, Peter pan, Heaven, Lucky one. These are my favorite EXO's songs. Finally, I hear goblin's OST. Goblin is famous drama in Korea. Stay with me, beautiful. These are my favorite Goblin's OST. I hope I can hear more good songs. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-04-04 답변내용 Today I will talk about songs that I listen. (missing punctuation [comma]/ correct choices of words) >>Today, I will talk about songs that I listened to. First, I hear maroon 5's songs. (correct verb 'listened') >>First, I listened to Maroon 5's songs. Maps, Sugar, Never ganna leave this bed. (correct letters) >>Maps, Sugar, and Never Gonna Leave This Bed. These are my favorite maroon 5's songs. (correct letter 'Maroon') >>These are my favorite Maroon 5's songs. Next, I hear EXO's songs. (correct verb 'EXO's') >>Next, I played EXO's songs. Artificial love, Peter pan, Heaven, Lucky one. (correct letters) >>Artificial Love, Peter Pan, Heaven, and Lucky One. These are my favorite EXO's songs. >> CORRECT << Finally, I hear goblin's OST. (correct choices of words) >>Finally, I listened to Goblin's OST. Goblin is famous drama in Korea. (correct choices of words) >>Goblin is a famous TV drama series in Korea. Stay with me, beautiful. (correct choices of words) >>Its OST are Stay With Me and Beautiful. These are my favorite Goblin's OST. >> CORRECT << I hope I can hear more good songs. >> CORRECT << *FOLLOW THE CORERCT FORMAT : Today, I will talk about songs that I listened to. First, I listened to Maroon 5's songs. Maps, Sugar, and Never Gonna Leave This Bed. These are my favorite Maroon 5's songs. Next, I played EXO's songs, Artificial Love, Peter Pan, Heaven, and Lucky One. These are my favorite EXO's songs. Finally, I listened to Goblin's OST. Goblin is a famous TV drama series in Korea. Its OST are Stay With Me and Beautiful. These are my favorite Goblin's OST. I hope I can hear more good songs. *NOTE : 1) Check the correct usage of words. 2) Use a capital letter on proper noun. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, I'm a music lover as well. But I listen to different genre, like New Age, Bossa Nova, French Jazz, and more. I heard how beautiful Goblin is. One day, I will watch it. I just need free time because am very busy watching English movies. Do you also like OST of movies? Wondering, Teacher Mea