1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-04-02 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 diary 내 용 Dear diary. Today I played with my friends outside. I went to riverside soccer field to play soccer there. Next, we went to apartment basketball field to play basketball tehre. Also, we went to tennis field to play foot volleyball. I went to eat dinner with my 6th grade school teacher because he is going to go to military one week later. So my friends who was same class in 6th grade eat dinner together. Finally I went to singing room. I think it was tiring but fun day. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-04-04 답변내용 Dear diary. (correct pronunciation [comma]) >>Dear diary, Today I played with my friends outside. (missing punctuation [comma]) >>Today, I played with my friends outside. I went to riverside soccer field to play soccer there. >> CORRECT << Next, we went to apartment basketball field to play basketball tehre. (correct spelling 'there') >>Next, we went to apartment basketball field to play basketball there. Also, we went to tennis field to play foot volleyball. (correct choices of words) >>Also, we went to tennis court to play foot volleyball. I went to eat dinner with my 6th grade school teacher because he is going to go to military one week later. >> CORRECT << So my friends who was same class in 6th grade eat dinner together. (correct choices of words) >>So my friends who were at the same class in 6th grade had a dinner with us. Finally I went to singing room. (correct noun) >>Finally, I went to a videoke bar. I think it was tiring but fun day. (missing article 'a') >>I think it was tiring but a fun day. *FOLLOW THE CORRECT FORMAT : Dear diary, Today, I played with my friends outside. I went to riverside soccer field to play soccer there. Next, we went to apartment basketball field to play basketball there. Also, we went to tennis court to play foot volleyball. I went to eat dinner with my 6th grade school teacher because he is going to go to military one week later. So my friends who were at the same class in 6th grade had a dinner with us. Finally, I went to a videoke bar. I think it was tiring but a fun day. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, I wonder what you mean by 'foot volleyball'. And why play volleyball on a tennis court. It must be a blast day with your pal and teacher. It's a great celebration before your teacher go to military. Salute, Teacher Mea