1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-03-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 facebook 내 용 Today I will talk about Facebook. Facebook is similar as naver. We can make friends in it and we can find out what we want to find. I have 60 friends now. I will make more friend in facebook. I'm interested in many friends now. I hope I can make more friends. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-03-24 답변내용 Today I will talk about Facebook. (missing punctuation [comma]) >>Today, I will talk about Facebook. Facebook is similar as naver. (correct letter 'Naver') >>Facebook is similar as Naver. We can make friends in it and we can find out what we want to find. (correct choices of words) >>We can make friends with it and we can find out what we need about people. I have 60 friends now. >> CORRECT << I will make more friend in facebook. (correct preposition 'on'/ correct letter 'Facebook') >>I will make more friends on Facebook. I'm interested in many friends now. >> CORRECT << I hope I can make more friends. (correct verb 'add') >>I hope I can add more friends. *NOTE : 1) Follow the corrections made. 2) Choose the correct words. 3) Use the correct punctuations : - period - comma - question mark - exclamation point - quotation - apostrophe 4) Use a capital letter on the title : WRONG : facebook CORRECT : Facebook 5) Use a capital letter on proper noun : WRONG : naver CORRECT : Naver ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, That's nice! Facebook is the right Social Networking Site (SNS) for you since you want to meet friends. Just be careful in choosing the people you will add on your acccount. Have a grwat fnd, Teacher Mea