1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2017-03-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 science 내 용 Today I will talk about what we study in science. First, we study about what is science's meant. Next we study about earth. We study rock and soil. I think we should memorize many things in middle school's science. We should memorize color of the rock, name of the rock, how solid it is. I should study it hardly. 답변자 ts0135 답변일 2017-03-21 답변내용 Today I will talk about what we study in science. (missing comma/ correct verb 'studied') >>Today, I will talk about what we studied in science. First, we study about what is science's meant. (repetitive word 'study'/ correct choices of words) >>First, we learned about what science meant. Next we study about earth. (missing comma/ correct choices of words) >>Next, we talked about the earth. We study rock and soil. (correct choices of words) >>We know more about rock and soil. I think we should memorize many things in middle school's science. >> CORRECT << We should memorize color of the rock, name of the rock, how solid it is. (missing article 'the') >>We should memorize the color of the rock, name of the rock, and how solid it is. I should study it hardly. >> CORRECT << *NOTE : 1) Use a capital letter on the title : WRONG : science CORRECT : Science 2) Observe the correct usage of words. ================================================================================================================================= Dear Daniel, That's a good attitude. Keep learning. No stopping... I love Science because you get to discover more about the earth. We're lucky that we have a living planet. Toast, Teacher Mea